Callisto 7 – take 2

So, I’ve decided to give Callisto 7 another go. You can read about the abandoned first attempt here and see all fifteen pages of that version here. Even though I walked away from it, the story stuck with me and I had some ideas of how to reapproach it. So that’s what I’m doing now.

Here are the first few pages of the second attempt.

That’s iambic trimeter that the character is speaking above.

And I’m planning for the story to be in color, but I’m still figuring out how I want to do it.